Sugary drinks should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.
Ongoing increased demand of over sweet product has risen health concern these days which may cause health hazardous. To combat this health expert desire to boost pricing for market therefore consumers world cut sugar intake. However increased price cannot be a complete solution as it should be followed by others practise mentioned in forthcoming paragraphs
Conspicuously sugar products and drinks has hold gross market in last decade. This became feasible by addiction or habit customers have, sometimes. Unconsciously . Hence increased price of these edibles would never let such segment to stop butting sugary food if they are self sufficient. Even some carbonated drinks are now part of diet for 40% population. Therefore in such case what will work ? Of course, willing less to avoid harmful sweet stuff. For this, campaigns should be organised to aware masses about consequences of adding excess sugar in their diet.
On the top of it, health is being deployed even by adverse lifestyle then why only particular market could be targeted? The increase price of the sugar food will not only encourage consumers to became But it also fuels inflation which Ehaos in business to customer business to take less sugar this way. Therefore since childhood importance of health and its well being must be included in school curriculum.
Conclusively processed sugar creates serous diseases (ailments) I diagnosed at early stage however with increased price of sugary products people need to ponder of harmful effect of sugar consumption. Besides they have to maintain diet balance for healthy body and mind It is well said healthy mind stays in healthy body
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, even so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24528301887 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58344447554 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664150943396 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0502155809 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193173796485 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555238032577 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501006065586 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112243371994 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317429785903 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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