Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work.
To what extent do you agree?
Given that the vast majority of artists earn inadequate wages, it is imperative that the government provide financial support to enable them to continue their artistic endeavour. I completely agree that it is the best way to tackle the issue of struggling artists.
One of the main reasons behind my agreement is that artists through their arts express thought , convey complex ideas and make people familiar with their cultures and histories. They foster creativity among children , help in community unity and inculcate a sense of shared identity among people. Thus , to sustain these benefits government funding is crucial. Secondly, unfortunately, many artists find it hard to earn their livelihood and rely on their arts , making it a government obligation to support and defend this cultural endeavour. In other words , artists not only add to the vitality and variety of society , but also have the ability to motivate and educate people.
Another reason is , funding artists ensures that they have all the required resources and opportunities to showcase their art work. This led them to continue creating and sharing their perspective to the World .
Finally, nowadays , the majority of the individuals pursue lucrative professions rather than becoming artists , due to low earning potential. Therefore , government support is a must for revitalizing this field and in order to encourage people , especially with god gifted talents to utilise their skills to the fullest . Consequently, ensuring the existence of certain art style in future.
In conclusion, i reiterate that to motivate new artists, diversify arts and foster creativity the government should provide monetary funds to artists.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51145038168 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87450807865 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4644647821 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286949047631 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891069690211 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580152534495 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15181627862 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377170322229 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.