Some people think that the government waste money on arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly argued that government funds should be spend on public service rather than on arts like music, museum. Although i believe that services should be authorities first priority , i also opine that arts are still important part of the culture.
One the one hand, there are certain reasons why i think that government spending should be on public services. The conspicuous one is that services such as health care, education, public transport have a direct influence on people's livelihood and these facilities represent the standard of living of society would have . To examplify , if government allocate money on health then the individuals have better health results in better mortality rate . similarly, with better education public can get better job and able to compete globally. Consequently, not only happiness of the general mass surge but also economic would be boosted as people have better chance of getting lucrative jobs.mostly unprivileged people are rely on these facilities the most so government should invest in these services .
One the other hand, i would argue that arts remain a pivotal and integral part of the nations culture. Firstly investment in arts ensure the protection of heritage of a country. To eleborate , as arts are the sign of identity and culture of a society and with its conservation , it create a sense of togetherness in people , resulting boost in patriotism. Secondly, due to advent of television and movies people are shifted more toward digital platform , and museum and art centers suffer from this. As a result , there revenue generation is deceased and without the financial aid of government they may result in closing permanent which will be a big loss to the society in cultural aspects as valuable information will be lost.
In conclusion, while i believe that government need to spend on public facilities , but i also opine that it should not be spent on the determint of arts .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14195583596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80343361419 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3119414332 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211603854229 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751978671135 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348514433636 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124617951069 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220171271628 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.