you have just read in a national newspaper which claims that your town center in my country all look very similar to each other
dear sir or madam
I write this article because I have just read in a national newspaper which claims that town center in my country all look very similar to each other. In this article, I would give my views and the end of part there is conclusion
This city center is one of other in my country and I was born in. As a your claim, I agree about it, especially many style of high building was planned by our government. It is due to government apply standard of building which established. That is important to avoid earthquake or other disease. As a result the building has long term.
However, the other one hand, I disagree with several point, mainly style of village where established. Every single habitation has a different culture, for example one of village has unique roof and other has a wall carvings. Further, each village in center city has a different culture social.
End of article, my center city has same things but the other hand has different things, especially my region has a lot of recreation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear sir or madam I write this article beca...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
...her in my country and I was born in. As a your claim, I agree about it, especially man...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun style seems to be countable; consider using: 'many styles'.
Suggestion: many styles
...our claim, I agree about it, especially many style of high building was planned by our gov...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t to avoid earthquake or other disease. As a result the building has long term. H...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...ease. As a result the building has long term. However, the other one hand, I disagr...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun point seems to be countable; consider using: 'several points'.
Suggestion: several points
...er, the other one hand, I disagree with several point, mainly style of village where establis...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally my region has a lot of recreation.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63736263736 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56837425443 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1327796197 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389967167411 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125555069011 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185600337012 0.0603063233224 308% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230089886839 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198149241326 0.0580467560999 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.