Children should always follow their parents’ advice.
Today, there are many views surrounding the relationship between parents and children, especially whether children should always follow their parents’ advice. In my point of view, children should follow their parents’ advice simply because parents always teach them good things.
First of all, children should follow their parents’ advice because parents have a broader understanding than children. Parents often teach their children from their experiences and that helps them not to make the same mistake they did.
Secondly, I also believe that children obey their parents will make family relationships stronger. Parents always love obedient children and this gives them both more motivation to try harder at work and still be able to enjoy happy moments with their family.
However, it is a fact that children do not always follow their parents’ advice absolutely because parents are not always right. Society is develop faster and faster, so it is possible that that parents’ understanding may no longer be correct. Children today receive a better education than previous generation so their mindset may be different from their parents.
In conclusion, I personally believe that children should follow their parents’ advice because parents always give the best advice to their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...arents are not always right. Society is develop faster and faster, so it is possible th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59296482412 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58283635961 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7180120702 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.3 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.735558597844 0.244688304435 301% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.380512107475 0.084324248473 451% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226670136451 0.0667982634062 339% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.523790471616 0.151304729494 346% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174110730668 0.056905535591 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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