Some people believe that famine is caused by climate change and preventing this will stop famine. What is your view of this?
Climate change is the most urgent issue facing the world today and many believe that it is the main reason for famine. Although I agree with this view to some extent, I believe that global warming is not the only factor causing this catastrophe and there are more contributing factors to the expansion of famine.
Firstly, global warming results in drought and consequently the loss of plants and extinction of animals which are main sources of human food. The world' temperature has risen as a result of a Carbon-fuelled lifestyle that decreases the amount of rainfall. Obviously, plants cannot grow without water and aquatic animals are extinct because of losing their habitat. More importantly, the loss of any species of animal causes imbalance in the ecosystem that makes the problem more intense. For instance, since rain has barely fallen for three years in South Africa, its people are associated with starvation.
Although the impact of global climate change on famine increase is undeniable, there are other factors that intensify the problem. Overpopulation and mismanagement creates a battle for food. If governments manage to successfully hire population control policies and optimise the food supply process, less people will suffer inadequate food intake. Many countries lacking water, have managed to provide their habitats with enough food by optimisation of their agricultural activities and proper management of import against export.
To sum up, global famine is not only connected to environmental problems, but also is related to social misconduct equally. However, preventing climate change can save people from great hunger because supplies will be enough for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s and optimise the food supply process, less people will suffer inadequate food inta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7753237553 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8000938085 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217579904762 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625802741333 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718321950147 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131334223539 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819707126879 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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