Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many are of the opinion that people live in a nation where they need to use a foreign language can deal with numerous social or practical problems. I completely agree with this notion, and this essay will clarify my view.
One of the most compelling reasons why I am in favor of this notion is that citizens have to adapt to the new environment when they are living abroad. Firstly, residents use their native language only instead of having a knowledge of another one. This means that international people have to speak foreign language fluently to overcome the language barrier and be able to survive in this region. For instance, all the local shops and local vendors speak English, so a temporary resident who is good at commutative skills will get products easily. Besides, having a long period of time to study or settle in other countries requires people to connect with neighbors as well as widen a social circle through daily conservation. Therefore, being fluent in the language of the country that they intend to move to is essential.
To add further to my assertion, coping with new cultures is another challenging thing. Hence each nation has different religions and laws, they make efforts to struggle a lot to fit in it. If they do not have a comprehension of communicating, they will not grab the opportunity to get a deep insight of their cultures to live for a long term. The consequence of this is that they feel lonely and low socializing. Furthermore, a multinational company has just accepted candidates that use their principle language effectively. For example, they can not work in Spanish office if they have a chance to travel to Spain for business. As a result, they lose the job that could help them to promote in career.
In conclusion, while many people think that language is not necessary in this day and age, I strongly believe that it may cause problems and difficulties in studying or settling overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...products easily. Besides, having a long period of time to study or settle in other countries r...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... cultures is another challenging thing. Hence each nation has different religions and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82934131737 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76611223325 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3705578464 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248012906514 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733374362097 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595272361794 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157212149393 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673513822443 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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