The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One school of thought holds that businesses' top priority needs to be making a profit, and they do not need to be concerned about their social obligations. While I accept that this idea is somewhat justifiable, I believe that, apart from generating profits, businesses also need to have responsibilities to society.
On the one hand, the effort to maximize the profits of companies is so crucial and could be beneficial to society as a whole. Firstly, organizations can only have public responsibilities if they are making money. This is because there are other expenditures to cover, such as wages, operational costs, or even costs to innovate in order to make more profit; if they could not pay the bills and survive, any concern about philanthropic actions becomes irrelevant. Secondly, by maximizing profits, organizations could expand their businesses. For instance, if the firm wants to grow, it would demand more departments or a new factory, which could create job opportunities for the community, thereby allowing people, especially the underprivileged to stand a greater chance of having an occupation and making a living.
On the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that organizations should also contribute to society and have responsibilities with it. The first reason is that enterprises’ activities could harm the environment. For example, if the production processes do not have proper supervision, this could give rise to adverse environmental degradation, namely water contamination and air pollution. Another reason is that firms could use a proportion of their profits to make positive contributions to the community. This is because using money to support charities, environmental projects, or educational initiatives could not only help less fortunate people, and create a cleaner environment but can also boost the company’s image and reputation.
In conclusion, while I agree with the fact that money plays a decisive role in business, I would contend that businesses should be more concerned about their social responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ving. On the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am co...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...d reputation. In conclusion, while I agree with the fact that money plays a decisive role in business...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42682926829 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3143819786 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5410576375 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239995147426 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082516319797 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091525888971 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157630216847 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975102939565 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.