In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As a result of technological advancement it is easier for people to search for a piece of information on a remarkable amount of network platforms. that’s why many people believe that in future physical publication won’t be bought, because online version of them are more affordable or free for reading. I tend to agree with this statement, because we will get used to read from screens for now on.
On the one hand, reading a book gives a big satisfaction with the way you turn the page. I remember when I was a child, one of my dreams was to have my home library, with a large amount of books, arranged on shelves in rainbow order. And my parents were trying to help me in reaching my dream, I had a lot of books, different genres, and I really read them, because I was putting on shelves just the ones I read. this is how I have fallen in love with reading. I suppose, if it was just online version of them, I wouldn’t enjoyed as much.
On the other hand, nowadays people tend to take care of our environment, and it means that cutting trees for paper is not as supported by general population as it was in past. More over because of the cost of physical publication, people don’t want to spend money on things that are cheaper or even free in online. For example, the hole series of Harry Potter books cost in average 50 euros, while the online one you can find for 5 euros or less. So, you will rather buy the online one and read on screen. In addition, screens aren’t as dangerous for vision as it was in the past, because you can change the luminosity and intensity of the colour in order not to harm your eyes.
This essay argued why people would rather buy an online book or publication, instead of printed ones. And I completely agree that with the help of new technologies we will get used with the screens and we will enjoy the reading on the gadgets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That
...remarkable amount of network platforms. that’s why many people believe that in futur...
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Suggestion:
...screens for now on. On the one hand, reading a book gives a big satisfaction ...
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...utting on shelves just the ones I read. this is how I have fallen in love with readi...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'wouldn't' requires base form of this verb: 'enjoy'
Suggestion: enjoy
...just online version of them, I wouldn’t enjoyed as much. On the other hand, nowaday...
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Suggestion:
...t enjoyed as much. On the other hand, nowadays people tend to take care of our...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...pported by general population as it was in past. More over because of the cost of physi...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun euros is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... online one you can find for 5 euros or less. So, you will rather buy the online one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while, as to, for example, i suppose, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40974212034 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47290719389 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518624641834 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4619504285 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18643342938 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695631430049 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636351671064 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123151462036 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414265588765 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.