In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed by some people that when young people finished their study program and get a job, in some nations, they continue to reside in their families. From my viewpoint, there are many benefits to this trend and I strongly support that it will outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several advantages when young adults live with their parents. Firstly, it saves a lot of money for them. In fact, young people who just join in a company could not have a high salary because they do not have much experience. Nowadays, people need to face the high cost of living so if they live with their families, their life becomes more comfortable and easier. Secondly Residing in their family helps forge a stronger relationship between parents and their parents. They have opportunities for immediate conversations and there are more regular face-to-face interactions. For example, during dinner time, newbies can share about their work with their parents and they will receive mental support or advice from experienced predecessors.
On the other hand, Staying with parents also brings a few disadvantages in those who do not live independently. They can be over-reliant on their family. To be honest, everyone can be lazy when they live with their family because they are not often doing housework, including washing dishes or preparing meals. Furthermore, the ability to make their own decisions will be affected. For example, in Viet Nam, a large number of parents are often involved in their children’s decisions so it harms directly their development of decision-making skills.
In conclusion, in my view, there are some disadvantages when young adults stay with their parents, but it is more beneficial than leading life alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11188811189 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81208453879 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0580689611 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37928544619 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124865857047 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707046401981 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226202316849 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450155165626 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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