Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Almost everyone remembers some good memories from childhood, or even lots of memories that at one point made oneself happy. Although some people do not think that childhood is one of the best stages in a person's life, there are some circumstances that only belong to this stage and generally produce positive feelings on people.
The first circumstance is that only during childhood people generally, do not have to worry about taking care of themselves, which means somebody else has the burden of providing on-time meals, clothing, entertainment, care and love to the children. For example, their parents or siblings.
The second thing is that during childhood there are no substantial responsibilities, like having to earn a living or to pay a debt. When getting to adulthood people are surrounded by bills and financial responsibilities; an example of that is education, which means that people need to get qualified graduate education and a house. In order to achieve this, many have to apply for a student loan or a housing loan. In this sense, some people may pledge that debts of any kind suppose a burden and affect negatively their welfare and happiness.
Finally, the environment during childhood frequently is characterized by friendship, patience and kindness. In contrast, when growing up, most of us have normally had to face cruel, jealous, and even envious people. For instance, when a child fights with another, they tend to make up very quickly or forget about it in a matter of hours, while when adults have an argument, it is hardly solved rapidly, and it might get worse with the passage of time. All of these situations build up a happy childhood for most people on earth, which may not hold still during adulthood and hence will make it more probable for a person to agree that early years are the best of their entire life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...hildhood is one of the best stages in a persons life, there are some circumstances that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, may, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94249201278 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74748123658 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1125094655 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116665706928 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370378806733 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341599866713 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684815357276 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266108191936 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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