In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, going to the shopping mall has become an essential part of everyday life. It is true that for some people, spending time in a shopping mall is not only for shopping but also for having fun and relaxation. We can see that this trend is very popular, but in my view, I totally disagree with going mall just for entertainment.
It is undeniable that shopping malls contain a lot of department stores, so it offers people a variety of services which can attract more customers. People often go shopping with their family and friends and they usually like having a fun time during their shopping. Therefore, we see more people spending their time in entertainment areas than in shopping sections.
In addition, shopping at malls cannot be replaced by online shopping. First of all, shopping at malls provides a lot of fun that cannot be had through websites. When shopping online, customers have to buy products without seeing what they exactly look like. The images of products are sometimes misleading. I often have to return clothes and other items because of the wrong sizes and colors, though they seemed to be right on the screen. The other reason is that online payment is not very secure, so shopping at malls is much safer than online shopping. Although the prices of the products at malls are higher, they have better quality. Finally, the delivery time of shopping online is beyond the patience of many people or they need that item urgently for some reason. This issue may as well justify shopping at malls as a necessity.
In conclusion, shopping malls are going to expand their entertainment areas in order to attract more customers. Nevertheless, people will never go to shopping malls just for entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90136054422 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61103332518 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0512777202 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391842402962 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138915220804 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091340987994 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276079877581 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095982694904 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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