You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor.
In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation.
Dear Sir,
Greetings of the day! I, Jenny jackson, a resident of Rosemary Avenue, Brampton, am writing this letter in order to request to reconsider some of the developments occurring in our vicinity.
At the onset, let me brief you on the specifics of my plea. First of all, as I am the football coach, I have been teaching many of the children of all age groups in this playground for five years. Moreover, we also won the intercity football match held last month in Brantford.
Further, there is no doubt that the recent changes have indeed turned fruitful in the locality. Although I appreciate the improvements, the plans for building the library in the northern part of the city by taking over the space of the football ground are putting most of the children and individuals in deep distress. As this place is a dream to achieve the aim of becoming a great footballer for many young aspirants, they are feeling demotivated now. Thus, I am seeking your support to make the needed alterations.
Finally, I would like to add to your knowledge that this kind of concern can be solved. please reconsider the western side of the city as the majority of the educational institutions are there. Additionally, as the location is accessible for most of the students and natives with ease and the traffic congestion is also low, I will be thankful if you please consider my plight and rethink your decision.
I would be grateful if you could please look into this matter.
With regards,
Jenny jackson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... resident of Rosemary Avenue, Brampton, am writing this letter in order to request...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...etter in order to request to reconsider some of the developments occurring in our vicinity....
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...hat this kind of concern can be solved. please reconsider the western side of the city...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, kind of, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85823754789 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72032809878 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1419425562 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12485936395 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373087543953 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330349664258 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683252261366 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159159620279 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.