Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some people trust that allow children to make their own choices on everyday matters. On the other hand, other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. In my opinion, I agree with the second idea because I think that have a good reasons.
Firstly, I disagree that allow children to make choices on everyday matters because no children choice matters for them will selfish. If they help some people has poor life that not individuals example when they see the poor people sit next to their haise and the children help and give her some food that is not selfish. Secondly, parents give their gifts and they can property management, they put in box are somewhere they wants. Finally, some children want to be that need to teach by their parents because, when they teach the children helping the difficult people they will remember.
Moreover, I strongly agree that people believe children to make decisions about matters that affect them. I think they can independence to decide for their life. In addition, they will responsible for that they make. Such as food, clothes and entertainment they can control and make everything they want. However, I think their parent should be always check them.
In conclusion, some people believe that allow children to make their own decision everyday is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. However, other people trust make kid choices every matters affect them. I agree with this views too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ent, they put in box are somewhere they wants. Finally, some children want to be that...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...low children to make their own decision everyday is likely to result in a society of ind...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...every matters affect them. I agree with this views too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33546113182 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473076923077 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2413773245 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500128538528 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182066890815 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17161453059 0.0667982634062 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373151518121 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159255090401 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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