Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people advide that one of the best method to address environmental problem is to rise the cost of fuel for cars and other mean of transports. I mostly disagree with this notion since it also have few benefit for the individuals. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, nowaday with the social development citizens have to work more hark working and do with all of their energy, so cars and other vehicles are significant equipment with humans. Increasing the cost of fuel is not the bright way to solve environmental problem, this trend also make individuals feel angrier. Furthermore, some governments take advantage from rising the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to make their own profit, that can not forgive with the state, because it may lead terrible influence to citizens and their nation. For instance, when the governments at any nation prefer money to their individuals, their country can not develop anymore and the people's life will be really horrible. In addition, these is not bias with poor people, they have to pay more money to the fuel for cars and other mean of transports and poor people will not have enough money to worry for their family and their life.
However, we can not said that increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles will not improve our environment but it is not an appropriate way and there are have a plenty of better method to solve environmental problem. For example, government can have the campaign for changing the awareness of each person to the environmental problem. Moreover, this trend will help people save more money, they will not go out if it is not necessary, so the individuals can avoid terrible things such as accident, drugs and society's vices.
To conclude, i mostly disagree with this statement because my agurement, but there are also have advantage for people. government need to have bright plan to help the people's life and their country better though per day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'few benefits'.
Suggestion: few benefits
...ree with this notion since it also have few benefit for the individuals. The following essa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will analyse this statement in detail. At first, nowaday with the social develo...
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Line 2, column 680, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...country can not develop anymore and the peoples life will be really horrible. In additi...
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Line 2, column 891, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...or people will not have enough money to worry for their family and their life. Howeve...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orry for their family and their life. However, we can not said that increasing...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...and their life. However, we can not said that increasing the cost of fuel for ca...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...is not an appropriate way and there are have a plenty of better method to solve envi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s accident, drugs and societys vices. To conclude, i mostly disagree with this...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ecause my agurement, but there are also have advantage for people. government need t...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...ere are also have advantage for people. government need to have bright plan to help the pe...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...nt need to have bright plan to help the peoples life and their country better though pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85250737463 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57669912011 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483775811209 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4499710784 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313005967752 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127801214491 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116571881558 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20290367675 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842090677936 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.