Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some managers think that job applicant' social skills are more significant than their academic qualifications. From my point of view, i mostly disagree with this notion since academic qualifications are hugely important in any occupation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, academic qualifications will help the individuals can solve new problems or hard questions. Not only need employers to have talent, knowledge and genius for managing their companies, but also managers need to have enough academic qualifications and well educated. Furthermore, at many fields or occupation which are difficul about theropy such as mathermatic, doctor and scientist then academic qualifications were really neccessary for their job. The information and knowledge which was passed down by older generation will be more benefit in their career. To illustrate, there was a interview about two postgraduate markt and kevin of science universities, both of them were the best student in their university but after course they had different choice in their career. markt who choice to built his social skills was less sucess than kevin who decide to be more concentrate in academic qualifications.
However, social skills are also important for the individuals's life. The citizens need to have basic life skills to get achivement in their career such as communication, presentation and interaction. Moreover, social skills will help people make more relationship in the social. this friend can be helpful for the development in their occupation. For instance, the billionare Jackma who used social skills for calling the investion in his business which called " Aladins", after the investion of international companies his business had grew up significantly with over 5 billion dollars.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay i totally disagree with this statement becauce academic qualifications can brings a plenty of advantage for the individual but we can not negate the important of social skill. Each person and each occupation need to have bright plan to have more development in their career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49848024316 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09923099617 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4041320377 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30661699467 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108302790494 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090285670553 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206213910187 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677587241645 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.