some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Morden world sales marketing use to advertise about their products in differnt ways and levels. It is become the majority subject of in every product and service manufacture companies. It is stated that some argue, advertising is believed to be extremely the best approach to persuade people to buy things, while others are believed that advertising is so common and worthless to pay attension. However, while I believe there are no impact by paying attention to some advertisements which so common and worthless, I totally agree that advertising is the best way to persuading community to buy things.
Generally, in modern society people use to buy things online and order to deliver goods at to their door steps. In consequently poeple are not aware of things which store in shops and markets, that the reason why advertising has become the vast significant subject in sales marketing while it is accounted the majority proportion from the budjet in each and every company.
Whether the items or services much useful or not, in point of my view advertising can make trends and persuade the society. As instance, health and food safety department has announced in 2022 that children below 10 years has highly addicted to instant food such as noodles, pasta, pizza, etc. The reseachs has found that attractive advising were the reason why this sort of problems rose. Not only children but also teenagers and adults usually go through those kind of advertisement and make trends to buy thing it self.
On the contrary, some advertising can be useless due to unwanted that are not essential for society, hence those are no longer need to pay attention.
In conclusion, eventhough some advertisements can be ignore, most of them persuade people and impress people to buy things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'delivering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: delivering
...ople use to buy things online and order to deliver goods at to their door steps. In conseq...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72961563115 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7547636025 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.583333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337349449048 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115644362614 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102738709773 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178011033703 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791760802038 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.