Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Some people believe that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports player are given too much money. From my point of veiw, i mostly agree with this notion since nowaday famous people are taken a plenty of benefit from the government. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, there are other numerous of fields and occupation which is hugely significant for the individual life that the state should highly paid such as teacher, dotor and science. Not only have government to provide more neccessary equipment, but also citizen need to get enough revenue to compare with their contribution for the social. Furthermore, many popular actist take advantage from their fame to do terrible action which have hamful influence for the individual and the social. To illustarte, bo who had the actist name is Jackson was a vietmese famous people drung 2000 and 2010, he was know as the best film stars in vietnam and attracted various international audiunce, but it had one time that he took advantage from the charity investion of homeless people to his own profit. After that his career had went down dramatically and nobody saw his performence anymore.
However, we can not negate the imprtant, significant and contribution of entertainers for the development of their country. The economic of nation will be increased significantly by their talent, ability and knowledge, and also they will help people more relax and comfortable after their hard-working time. Moreover, adolescence will had effective affection from their successful and achivement. The youngs generation will seem it like their inspiration and motivation to be more develop in their career.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay i tottal agree with this statement that entertainers are paid too much money, so government need to have bright plan to invent in other fields for the development of their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17307692308 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7750117721 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.493549963 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212450514881 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711440020977 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979981292778 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13225715329 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635603171094 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.