In some countries, young ppl have become richer, healthier, and live longer but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
In many places, youngsters are believed to be healthier and have longer lifespans, but they are not necessarily happy, even if they have more possessions. It is the aim of this essay to unveil the reasons behind this phenomenon and give some solutions to this problem.
The main root cause of this current issue is advertising. In other words, the youth of today are strongly influenced by marketing. It makes them believe that they would derive more and more enjoyment from buying new things. According to a marketing research in the United States in 2020, most people participating in the survey said that they were definitely on temporary high when they purchased novel stuff. However, this fails to bring young people happiness. By contrast, it would only result in disillusionment among young people.
There are several ways to accommodate this problem. First of all, the authorities and national leaders should adopt a law on the restriction of advertising. The advertisements should be under scrutiny before being accessible to the public. Finland, which is the happiest country in the world, has recently restricted advertisements on the Internet and national television programmes. This has been proven to be effective when more people are recorded to give up buying new things and gradually become happier. Another proposition is to encourage youngsters to take up sports and musical instruments instead of being passive consumers of latest products. The governments should hold more competitions in sports and music so as to foster young people to participate in extracurricular activities actively.
In conclusion, the one principal reason for this current issue is advertising. It is the responsibility of governments and national leaders to restrict the activities of the marketing industry to bring more happiness to people. Besides, young people should be encouraged to take part in more activities to develop both their physical and emotional health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ents instead of being passive consumers of latest products. The governments should hold m...
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Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...d more competitions in sports and music so as to foster young people to participate in e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35806451613 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0445273397 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.353455305 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190057948266 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553308030474 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444861457421 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123118759541 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605357687923 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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