In many countries, paying for the things using phone apps becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Nowadays, purchasing items with a use of mobile phone apps has been becoming more and more popular. Eventhough, this phenomenon maintains some obvious harmful consequences , I believe that the benefits that it brings about can not outshine the demerits.
There are a variety of reasons why people assume that it has dissadvantages. First and foremost, a certain amount of payment should be paid to install apps which does not need when it comes to paying cash. In addition, whether customers do shopping or not , every month a tiny amount of money subtracted from apps as a donations or taxes. In term of the security purposes consumes have already put code numbers , and as a result, if they once forget the password, it would be quite difficult to pay .To make matters worse customers mush go to banks to do the proper protocols. For instance , as locked my app by putting codeword many times, i had to block it from using it .
Despite the expressed demerits , there are numerous advantages consumers can gain from this development. With a growth of technology people do not need to bring cash everywhere ,which is not suitable for every occasions. As it Easy to pay for items there is no need to worry about having coins or keeping changes. Furthermore, the safety is one of the crucial factor for having apps to purchase things. Since pay app has been created the way in which pople can only allow to pay once correct password should be inserted it gives a sense of safety and satisfaction. For example, my uncle who lives is London put a difficult codeword not to be discovered by others.
The improvements of paying methods has influenced the consumerism. While it has some adverse effects, the benefits it has to offer can not overshadow the setbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81848184818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7250190236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1628743192 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248577230245 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737347090475 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713833578093 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133854484802 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689302974992 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.