Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is a widely agreed opinion that there is an increase in the number of adults and children who are working and studying remotely since technological advancement are more affordable and available. In my opinion, it is a positive development because the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, humans utilizing technological devices to work and study at house has some negative influences on their life. The most notable drawback is that individuals will lose their opportunities to interact with other face-to-face, which might gradually shrivels their soft skills such as communication and presentation away. For example, people who attend physical classes at university and go to workplace are found to be more confident to speak and express their ideas than those who prefer to stay at home to do their studying and working purposes.
On the other hand, there are a myriad of merits that people could be benefited when applying technology to work and study at home. Firstly, they can get rid of traffic congestion at daily rush hours because of the dramatic decrease in the number of personal vehicles. To illustrate, during the Covid-19 pandemic, when highschoolers and undergraduates as well as white collars in Hanoi was allowed to continue all of their tasks remotely, the capital city witnessed a 70 percent decrease in the number of motorbikes. Secondly, when people are able to work and study at home, they will have more time to take care of their family. For instance, for women who have infants, thanks to the invention of those smart devices, they can nurture their children thoroughly without worrying about losing their jobs.
In conclusion, my opinion is that despite some demerits of studying and working at home by using techonology, its benefits seem to be more outstanding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15540540541 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9039201106 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5210262293 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.727272727 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201310353099 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880287042861 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623915848732 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142878222079 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382427478588 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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