The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now
The map illustrates how the village of Pebbleton has changed during 20 years.
Overall, it is clear to see that several locations in this region have been changed over 20 years, whereas some places have unchanged. At the moment, there are various locations than the past.
To begin with, looking at the plan we can see the Old Fort was removed to make way for the children’s playground. The film studio, which was opposite the Old Fort also was cleared for flat 20 years. Next to the children’s playground was the community center that is constructed at present while the lighthouse still has remained stable.
Turning to the rest of the places, on the side of lighthouse lane, although in the last 20 years, this area did not use for any purposes, right now, one tennis court has built with the aim to serving the demand of residents. Additionally, a footpath has set up next to the tennis court to create a small road for the locals move to. Moreover, one bridge across through the footpath also established for everyone commute from school to another area. Furthermore, even though the number of houses in this village that was quite near the lighthouse lane just 4 houses, right now their figure has been increased to 7 houses. Finally, other roads and Roadbridge has been maintained until now
- In the future it seems more difficult to live on the earth Some people think more money should be spent on researching other plants to live in such as Mars To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now 61
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights while others argue that animals should be exploited to satisfy mankind s various needs Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, look, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80973451327 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53525922799 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9418490271 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12869048153 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487737751931 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560104360244 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909903536572 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670279677778 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.