IELTS writing sample: The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in relation to a job position entitled librarians assistant which advertised in the college board. After reading your criteria, I am confident that I am suitable person for this position.
I am one of the students who is studying computer software in third term in engineering college. Regarding my experience, I would say I have not worked in the library before that. However, I am specialist in programming, searching relevant articles in valuable browsers. Therefore, I can assist students to find appropriate articles for their project. Furthermore, I am able to program a new software for collecting and arranging data.
Anyway, I would like to achieve this part time job as for two main reasons. Firstly, because of some financial issues, I need to find a job to afford my extents. Secondly, I can perform my project in the library in the time I am free.
I hope you find me a dedicated person for this position.
I am looking forward to hearing you soon.
Best regards
Elham Mousavi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-15 | elham mousavi | 78 | view |
| 2023-07-04 | elham mousavi | 81 | view |
| 2023-06-28 | karunarora | 56 | view |
| 2020-10-03 | Daxesh | 56 | view |
| 2020-04-29 | VIJAYENDRA THAKUR | 70 | view |
- Some people think that cities are the best places to live Others prefer to live in a rural area Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today s society To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened and that you want your money back Things to include You need to be concise but explain what happened No one respond 73
- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed All blood sports should be banned Discuss the main arguments for this 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in relation to a job positi...
^^^
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arians assistant which advertised in the college board. After reading your criter...
^^
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
.... Anyway, I would like to achieve this part time job as for two main reasons. Firstly, b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tly, because of some financial issues, I need to find a job to afford my extents...
^^
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... financial issues, I need to find a job to afford my extents. Secondly, I can pe...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88068181818 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91192488913 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1407870123 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0769230769 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132205868077 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434756873847 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263201072271 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721485118057 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306221503507 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.