Three years ago, because of flooding at the Western Palean Wildlife Preserve, 100 lions and 100 western gazelles were moved to the East Palean Preserve, an area that is home to most of the same species that are found in the western preserve, though in larger numbers, and to the eastern gazelle, a close relative of the western gazelle. The only difference in climate is that the eastern preserve typically has slightly less rainfall. Unfortunately, after three years in the eastern preserve, the imported western gazelle population has been virtually eliminated. Since the slight reduction in rainfall cannot be the cause of the virtual elimination of western gazelle, their disappearance must have been caused by the larger number of predators in the eastern preserve.
Three years ago 100 lions and 100 western gazelles from Western Palean Wildlife Preserve were shifted to East Palean Preserve due to flooding. East Palean Preserve is home to the similar species that are found in western preserve just larger in number. It is also home to eastern gazelle that is a close relative of western gazelle. The only difference between the western and eastern preserves is the climate, the eastern preserve experiences slightly less rainfall. After three years in eastern preserve, it was analysed that the population of western gazelle is decreasing. Since rainfall cannot be a factor affecting this as the amount of rain is just slightly less than the western preserve but large number of predators can be a possibility of the elimination of western gazelles.
The elimination of a particular species depends on various factors and becomes very difficult to analyse the major one, the decrease in number of western gazelles in the Eastern Palean Wildlife preserve can be a consequence of the change in habitat and lifestyle of the animal. For example, according to world wildlife as the climatic conditions are changing so drastically in the world, making weather and seasons unpredictable during any period of the year, it becomes very difficult for an animal to be shifted to a new place and getting adopted to it. The western parts of the preserve was the original habitat of the gazelle, changing it’s habitat to a new place can affect their number. Eastern preserve experiencing slightly less rainfall can be a reason, as the adequate amount of rainfall that these animals are habitual of is not satisfied by the climatic conditions of the area, hence not getting the same amount of rainfall can lead to their population decrease.
Changing the habitat of anyone either it be human or animals does affect the mental health and immunity. An animal residing in a space where it has been since the birth, a place where even it’s ancestors spent all their life makes them adaptive to that specific situations and surroundings. When a human moves from one city to another they face a lot of difficulties to adapt to the people and happenings of that place, sometimes it even becomes difficult to cope up with all the daily needs as being not familiar with new shops and places, similarly it becomes difficult for animals to get adopted to new places, it even starts affecting their mental health making them sick and reducing their life span. Animals in new environments can miss their original habitat or home, this can even make them depressed hence not in a mood to eat adequate food resulting in weakness in the body. Therefore, a new habitat can affect animals mentally as well as physically resulting in reduction of life.
Hunting is an art, defined as one of the most important skills of an animal to survive in the jungle. It is the act in which animals kill the other one to feed their families. Like Humans when in their hometown know all the routes, houses, people, shops and attractions, similarly, for an animal when in it’s habitat knows all the places to hunt and even to hide from other predators, where to run and behind which bush to hide. Western gazelles being not familiar with places to hide and which direction to run makes them the perfect target of the old residents of Eastern preserve. Also, the number of lions are increased in the Eastern preserve as 100 more lions were shifted to the same preserve, lions being the king of the jungle it is an easy task for the crown holder to hunt these gazelles to get ample amount of flesh to fill their stomachs and feed the cubs.
Western gazelles moved to their new home that is Eastern preserve have many reasons of fall in their population like climatic conditions, unfamiliar environment, hunting and even slightly less amount of rainfall, but we cannot standardize one sole factor and it equally depends on every aspect.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 672 350
No. of Characters: 3199 1500
No. of Different Words: 265 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.091 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.76 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.487 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 239 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 183 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 113 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.476 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...that are found in western preserve just larger in number. It is also home to eastern gazelle tha...
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Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: IT_IS[21]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...iginal habitat of the gazelle, changing it’s habitat to a new place can affect their...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...hanging the habitat of anyone either it be human or animals does affect the mental...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...een since the birth, a place where even it’s ancestors spent all their life makes th...
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Line 4, column 302, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'in its habitat'?
Suggestion: in its habitat
...ractions, similarly, for an animal when in it’s habitat knows all the places to hunt and even t...
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Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: IT_IS[18]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...tions, similarly, for an animal when in it’s habitat knows all the places to hunt an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 11.1786427146 197% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 55.5748502994 178% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3261.0 2260.96107784 144% => OK
No of words: 672.0 441.139720559 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85267857143 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09145979004 4.56307096286 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55124934311 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 204.123752495 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40625 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1039.5 705.55239521 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6559055829 57.8364921388 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.285714286 119.503703932 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.324526521 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328720459883 0.218282227539 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127556344993 0.0743258471296 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157176076674 0.0701772020484 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203059884772 0.128457276422 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188083867309 0.0628817314937 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.3799401198 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.3550499002 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 98.500998004 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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