More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
An influx of people are migrating to metropolises in order to look for better living conditions and vocational opportunities, however, living in a city may bring various difficulties for these people. In this essay, I want to imply some difficulties of city life and indicate some solutions for governments to improve the quality of urban life for everyone.
Admittedly, there are multiple adverse drawbacks for living in a city especially for those who migrate from rural areas. First, the high expense of living must be considered when moving into a new city. It is manifested that most cities have a higher living standard than the surrounding suburb leading to the prohibitively expensive cost. Moreover, there are numerous additional fees which you don’t have to pay much in rural areas such as parking and laundry. Second, along with the burgeoning of the cities, the high crime rate also becomes a concerning problem. People who have just started a city life are easily becoming the target of crimes exerting multiple scams. For example, migrants are virtually impatient in finding jobs to cover living costs, as a result, they are cheated and lose an immense amount of money.
However, there are several ways to make city life suitable for everyone. The government should set up a fund to support these migrants so that they have a source of capital before starting a life in the city. They can use this amount of money to pay for necessary expenses such as a flat and food before being employed. Therefore, this can reduce stress for those migrating from the countryside. Moreover, the government should cut down on unnecessary fees such as parking permits and public transports to help them get used to city life.
To sum up, moving to live in a city can bring various difficulties, therefore, the government has to eliminate these difficulties to support them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00319488818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73589525475 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1993306492 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389504208889 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125487030652 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915293544395 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248138603004 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861307789447 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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