Global warming is increasing day by day. what are the causes of global warming and what can be done to eradicate this global problem?
Global warming has sparked a global conversation these years due to its severity and devastating repercussions for the Earth. Deforestation and industrial activities, in my perspective, are the two leading reasons. However several effective solutions can be implemented to mitigate the current situation.
The degradation of forests and the poisonous emissions discharged from factories are the two primary causes of global warming. Firstly, the expansion of industrialization and urban planning result in the cutting down of trees and the obliteration of massive woodlands. Due to the loss of trees, carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases are not absorbed completely, hence they accumulate in great quantities in the atmosphere. In addition, human beings’ industrial activities release tons of contaminants and pollutants into the surrounding environment. These harmful chemicals accelerate the carbon dioxide emission from underground soil. Consequently, numerous greenhouse gases gradually increase in enormous amounts in the Earth’s atmosphere and absorb solar radiation that has bounced off the Earth's surface, thus trapping heat and warming the globe up.
Nonetheless, governments and citizens globally can join hands to abate the adverse effects of global warming. To commence with, leaders of all nations in the world ought to restrict hazardous industrial emissions and harmful chemical waste from being discharged into the surroundings. It is the authorities that promulgate rigid codes and strict regulations, as well as launching numerous media campaigns in order to raise awareness among citizens. Besides, every individual ought to seriously abide by environment-protecting requirements from the ruling classes. For example, owing to some radical changes in the garbage segregation and recycling process conducted by the government, Australia has witnessed a massive decline in the number of nylon bags and disposable products used, along with a surge in canvas bag quantities.
In conclusion, global warming has led to catastrophic consequences for the Earth, as well as pushing the global temperature to dangerously high levels; however, the aforementioned governmental policies and individual attempts would prevent global warming from worsening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96636085627 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31231202278 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639143730887 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5687415183 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.066666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22856824703 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667845095246 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907626820985 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155995954293 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730960823295 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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