Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime.
To what extent do you agree?
As a matter of fact, in some nations the proportion of crimes is rising; therefore they conceived that the most effective method for coping with offences is to assign more police forces on the streets. Personally, I am a proponent of this standpoint for some reason.
To commence with, when there are ore lawful officers on the streets, people may be more conscious of what they intend to commit, especially illicit activities. Criminal-oriented behaviours can be hindered because some individuals evoke a feeling of being probed, caught and captured during the course of their action but they cannot cover or conceal their apparent wrongdoings. Also with the more intense density of cops, it is more difficult for an offender to escape from the criminal site as they ensure the law enforcement will be implemented at once.
Another reason for this modification is concerning the swift reaction from the authority. More police forces in the area means the reaction will be facilitated to speed up to some extent. Whenever a criminal case such as robbery, accidents or murders, is reported, the cops will approach the site faster and handle it at once, even before the offence has formed. For instance, now that numerous traffic accidents happen because of drunk drivers, many policemen and women have been placed adjacent to some boozing areas to prevent repercussions or grievous accidents induced by those who drank recently. As a result, perhaps people will not let them involve in such cases regarding laws or regulations after facing it once.
To conclude, crime rates are experiencing an increase in different countries, which become one of the most complicated challenges to tackle. Thus, placing a considerable number of police forces in plenty of corners seems feasible to positively change the situation as they can have moderate influences on the citizens who possibly perpetrate offences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ng of being probed, caught and captured during the course of their action but they cannot cover or c...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... or conceal their apparent wrongdoings. Also with the more intense density of cops, ...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... Another reason for this modification is concerning the swift reaction from the authority. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as for, as to, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20846905537 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8306057732 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641693811075 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5160931143 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190220505558 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653995941851 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517238696755 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111827447327 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224779667658 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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