The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.
These two pie charts demonstrate the amount of energy consumption and the greenhouse gas generated in normal families in Australia.
Overall，the heating consumption demonstrate of energy use in Australian families and the energy consumed by heating is nearly half of household greenhouse gas emissions in Australia .
In the first chart，the largest amount of household energy which people in Australia use is heat and there are consumptions by heating（42percent），followed by water heating（30percent）.According to the second chart，the pollutants of greenhouse gas produced the gas emitted for heating ，with 15 percent in general heating and 32 percent for water heating . Additionally，the percentages of other categories of energy use are quite small，among them cooling just occupies 2 percent，the minimum figure compared with others. Similarly，cooling takes the least share of gas emissions at 3 percent.
Although the energy consumption in other applicants only represents 15 percent，the corresponding greenhouse gas eruption is nearly one third of all.
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- When new towns are planned it is more important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, similarly, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19205298013 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.65297050965 2.65546596893 175% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.7169559024 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.833333333 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168244857692 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086373818957 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618620072695 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112074614573 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573037722355 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.92 11.4140731707 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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