SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT STUDYING AT UNIVERSITY OR COLLEGE IS THE BEST ROUTE TO A SUCCESSFUL CAREER, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER TO GET A JOB STRAIGHT AFTER SCHOOL. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
People hold different views on whether getting an occupation or continuing their studies after finishing school brings more merits. While a number of citizens believe that finding a profession would be better for them, I am committed to the notion that going to further education is more advantageous.
There are various compelling reasons why people should seek a job after finishing school. Firstly, due to the fact that they get a job earlier, they will be able to supplement their income. In that way, they can afford to buy their own home and start a family. Secondly, in terms of their career, the young who decide to find an occupation instead of continuing their studies may be promoted more quickly. By participating in training programs, employees have the opportunity to gain practical experience as well as learn new skills relevant to their careers.
Even though there are arguments against tertiary-level education, I am of the opinion that it is necessary to complete it after high school. From my perspective, academic degrees are required in a variety of professions. Without relevant qualifications, it is impossible to become doctors, lawyers, or lecturers. As a result, university graduates may have a greater chance of obtaining well-paying jobs after they graduate. Furthermore, labor markets have become competitive, and there are hundreds of applications competing for a position in companies. Consequently, citizens who do not have degrees may not be able to apply easily.
In conclusion, while there are some benefits of getting a job after high school, I still agree with those who think that going to tertiary-level education is more beneficial.
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- SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT STUDYING AT UNIVERSITY OR COLLEGE IS THE BEST ROUTE TO A SUCCESSFUL CAREER WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER TO GET A JOB STRAIGHT AFTER SCHOOL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 87
- Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus Do you think this is a positive or negative development 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27985074627 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06654449563 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5423126021 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18766866697 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567359626666 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577813428053 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120316225173 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470190993889 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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