The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Every person of respective nation tries to make his country proud of him by contribution inventions which help in mitigating the difficulties faced by people in day-to-day life. One should not criticize achievements made physics by scientists by solving extremely hard problems or even artist for his art. Contribution or achievements which help somehow a nation to be recognized as extraordinary is true achievement. I do not agree with the topic as make unique contribution in recognizing country or nation on international level is true achievement for a nation who ever it may be.
Solving, real life problems is treated as a way in which we can make contributions. For example, GPS (Global Positioning System) which is used by almost every person in world. GPS not only solves problem but also help in keeping criminals under pressure. GPS solves the problem of locating a person on ground with the help of electronic device. This achievement made US recognized on international scale. Even its citizens are proud of scientists which invented such an incredible solution for problem which made many problems easy.
Similarly, In Saudi Arabia women were banned from driving car, roaming in public places without burqa and more restrictions were imposed. But when its crown prince removed such restrictions for the welfare of citizens. Every person made proud of crown prince for removing such restrictions and made female citizens life easy. It was a life changing event for female citizens of Saudi Arabia. Such kind of contributions is also indicator of great nation. Making such contribution in peace, humanity, welfare and many more places are surest indication of country being on path of becoming a great nation.
Welfare is also an aspect which marks an achievement for a nation just like European nations which are working together to make every citizens life less miserable by developing infrastructure, jobs, roads and many more. If a government helps its citizens by providing free education to needy students it not just make country developed but also recognized as happy country in world.
Whoever makes the achievement or in which ever field if it somehow help people in living a less hard, bold or miserable life is surest indicator of great nation. Differentiation should be on the basis of making life easier not on who achieves the achievements. Achievements which make citizens proud of it is sure shot indicator of great nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...oving such restrictions and made female citizens life easy. It was a life changing event...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the surest'.
Suggestion: are the surest
... humanity, welfare and many more places are surest indication of country being on path of ...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...hich are working together to make every citizens life less miserable by developing infra...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...nt or in which ever field if it somehow help people in living a less hard, bold or m...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the surest'.
Suggestion: is the surest
...ing a less hard, bold or miserable life is surest indicator of great nation. Differentiat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15538847118 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94761775837 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7111800113 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9523809524 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61904761905 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221248298002 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741664118181 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686661492967 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133193147082 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541266380866 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.