These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages of studying in a foreign country
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In recent years, there has been a growing concern about whether students should or should not study in a foreign country. However, everything has its own merits and demerits. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of why students choose to study abroad.
At the outset, it is crucial to recognise that there are plenty of merits of studying abroad. One of the main positives of heading overseas is that it provides a unique opportunity to immerse oneself in a new culture. This allows them to have a better understanding of other cultures and develop cross-cultural skills, which are highly valued by employers in today’s globalized world. Another advantage is that studying in a foreign country where the language is different from one’s native language can help improve language skills. By talking with native speakers, students are provided a great opportunity to completely immerse themselves in a new language. There are plenty of ways to learn a language, but it is it’s often said that the best way to learn a language is to surround yourself with it.
On the other hand, it is essential to acknowledge the opposing viewpoints. One of the biggest drawbacks of studying abroad is the financial burden. Studying in a foreign country means that students have to spend a great deal of money on flight tickets, renting accommodation, tuition, and so on. This can result in a huge financial burden not just on themselves but also on their families too, as students have to work to earn more money and pay for living expenses instead of focusing on their studies. Another definite disadvantage of studying abroad is homesickness. It's difficult to live in a country that is completely foreign and from where you used to live; , it takes time to get used to it and start a new life here. This might cause feelings of frustration, loneliness, and homesickness.
In summary, studying overseas, with its pros and cons, can have a double-edged effect on our lives. From my standpoint, I believe that experience gained from studying in other countries is desirable for international students and they’re also gaining proficiency in another language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10055865922 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91978614086 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2924664846 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176845512293 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516667556007 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401983205571 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106217574585 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391712625893 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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