Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to leam how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the recent period, when it comes to development of children, some people believe that it is better to ask children to engage themselve in group activites. On contrary, other focuses more on individual involvement for any task. I have discussed both the views along with my opinion in the below paragraphs.
Taking into account the views of former, allowing children to get togather and perform any activity will prove very helpful to make them understand the value of team-work. For example, setting up an activity for treasure hunt, and asking children to form team and find the clue by cooperating , then it will help them to realize that how faster they can reach to a solution if they work in a team. Hence, being in a group will teaches the value of group work.
Considering the opinions of later, engageing oneself in solitory play will make one understand about their own weaknesses and strengthes. It is noticed that while one engage in solo play they do more self talk which allows them to know what is the problem where thay are lacking, and what they can do to overcome that issue by using their problem solving. Therefore, being with oneself promotes self growth.
In my thoughts, both of the methods are equally impoartant, as one will promotes the social skills, whereas other support independence. For example, being in a group teaches to accept the views of others, cooperation, sharing and so on, while performing an indiviual activity makes a person to make their own decision to solve issue without concering other. So, both the methods are important for the growth and progress of folk.
To conclude, both the ways are essential as group activities supports socialization , whereas individual activites promotes growth.
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Message: Did you mean 'accepting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: accepting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00342465753 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63601053288 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7189665542 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231194969521 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770803459958 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427198459329 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121240492003 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502623393193 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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