In any fields - business, politics, education, government - those in power should be required to step down after five years.
In any field, it's the expert who can draw path of success in a definite way by taking various aspect's or factor's into consideration. Developing or experimenting all such path's takes sufficient amount of time and need to be a flawless path. Laying path to govern certain things totally depends on factor's oof respective field like Gross Domestic Product of country to curtail the economic downfall in country or craving path for improving literacy of citizen's and many more. If, some policy is to be implemented on large scale then it will take sufficient amount of time to grab attention of audiences and show some result's. What if, the policy is rescind after certain amount of time, it will cost time and money with no certain outcome.
First is the example of Vladimir Putin, the President of Russian Federation, which one of the world's most important country. He is been president for more than 20 years and paved way more policies which he find to be useful in shaping the lifestyle of his citizen's. But, being president for long time not only ruled out the possibility of alternate idea's but also changed the mindset of citizen's to change the leadership of country. He eventually manipulated constitution of country to be in power for long time.
Second is the example of African countries like Niger, Ghana, Nigeria and many more. Where the country is suffering from economic downfall and their is not sufficient source of knowledge or even lifestyle which can shape the future of country. If, they started taking elections for new leadership after every five years, it will cost them huge amount for getting a leadership which might be capable of solving problems. Which seems to be not viable, as the important task for country to ameliorate the country rather than terminating spearhead after certain time period.
Third is the example of Jeff Bezos, the ex-CEO and Founder of Amazon, which is the one of the largest e-commerce platform in world. Bezos, stepped down after retiring from post just to let the new leader's to take over the company and solve the upcoming challenges by their own capabilities.
I do partially agree with the statement, it totally depends on the situation and problem's faced by the person. Sometime, its the need to lead respective field to make sure all other are eventually have good lifestyle or even one's will to give up the post and make sure the problem's are being solved by upcoming generation's most efficiently.
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- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals 58
- People s behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making 66
- Government should offer a free university to any student who has been admitted to university but who cannot afford the tuition 16
- Unfortunately in contemporary society creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind the image 75
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
In any field, its the expert who can draw path of success...
^^^
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a definite way" with adverb for "definite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the expert who can draw path of success in a definite way by taking various aspects or factors in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factors'' or 'factor's'?
Suggestion: factors'; factor's
...overn certain things totally depends on factors oof respective field like Gross Domesti...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 648, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'rescinded'.
Suggestion: rescinded
...ow some results. What if, the policy is rescind after certain amount of time, it will c...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...rs and paved way more policies which he find to be useful in shaping the lifestyle o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...is suffering from economic downfall and their is not sufficient source of knowledge o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...problems faced by the person. Sometime, its the need to lead respective field to ma...
^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...d to make sure all other are eventually have good lifestyle or even ones will to giv...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88995215311 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60061822032 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528708133971 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.410344227 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.235294118 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125881918006 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379773005813 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305255991282 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640613729324 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130565132611 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
In any field, its the expert who can draw path of success...
^^^
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a definite way" with adverb for "definite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the expert who can draw path of success in a definite way by taking various aspects or factors in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factors'' or 'factor's'?
Suggestion: factors'; factor's
...overn certain things totally depends on factors oof respective field like Gross Domesti...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 648, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'rescinded'.
Suggestion: rescinded
...ow some results. What if, the policy is rescind after certain amount of time, it will c...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...rs and paved way more policies which he find to be useful in shaping the lifestyle o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...is suffering from economic downfall and their is not sufficient source of knowledge o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...problems faced by the person. Sometime, its the need to lead respective field to ma...
^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...d to make sure all other are eventually have good lifestyle or even ones will to giv...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88995215311 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60061822032 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528708133971 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.410344227 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.235294118 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125881918006 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379773005813 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305255991282 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640613729324 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130565132611 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.