Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller buildings. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?
Cities have different views with regard to solutions to tackle their growing population. While some construct high-rise apartments to improve housing capability, others would like to expand thier cities. Both of these solutions have its own beneficial impacts; however, I align with the latter opinion.
On the one hand, there are several merits of building multi-storey apartments to provide houses in cities. To commence with, one of the major benefits is the increasing in housing capacity. Taller residental building with multiple floors and units, can accommodate a larger number of residents within a smaller footprin land. Another advantage of multi-storey building is that it can maximize the efficient use of limited urban land. For instance, while population density is increasing with the scarcity of available land, high-rise apartments can provide the necessary housing capacity without spawling into green spaces or encroaching on natural lanscapes.
On the other hand, building on wider areas of land can also bring numerous advantageous effects on either cities or individuals. First of all, with the expandation of land, the noise level and traffic congestion of cities can be minimized. In fact, many research studies have shown that, due to the huge influx of people moving to the cities every year, cities witness traffic jams almost every days. So expanding land can expand more roads which can reduce traffic congestion effectively, especially in rushing hours. Furthermore, wider land areas can offer people more spacious living environments. Residents can enjoy larger home, ample green spaces and closer connection to nature. This contributes to higher quality of life and improved well-being.
In conclusion, to solve the population explosion in cities, both of the solutions that contructing multi-storey apartments or building on wider areas bring several benefits. However, I believe that expanding city’s land is a better one as it offers a better living space for people and also reduce the traffic problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53821656051 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79358185092 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7457331059 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.294117647 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331386565711 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988483306878 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611749678695 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194208417455 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286876896988 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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