Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that the population is plummeted in the last few decades. Few people argue that the earth's problems are many, but mostly is overpopulation. I agree with the latter statement and I will explain my view with the relevant examples in this essay.
Firstly, the planet Earth is going through devastation and the overload of mankind is the reason behind it. There are three major issues namely, pollution, extinction of natural conservation, and global warming. The cause of global warming is inversely proportional to the depletion of the ozone layer. It has adverse effects on other parts of the world. For example, the rate of melting glaciers. Although the water occupies 70% of the earth, there is an increase in water levels. Moreover, another issue is the reduction of flora and fauna due to deforestation.
However, these causes are connected to human beings. Another challenge is pollution and this is because of the inappropriate exploitation of natural resources. For instance, the bad sewage arrangements have led to water pollution, whereas the traffic and firecrackers due to the overly populated humans have caused air pollution. Furthermore, this excessive-quality of air has led to the disappearance of the ozone layer.
To sum up, it is true that the current natural disasters are unavoidable and the foremost reason behind the problems is mostly the excessive population in many countries. I certainly agree and I think this cannot be avoided considering the situation, but can be controlled for the worst that can happen in the future by declining the birth rate, and pollution and embracing the gifts from Mother Earth instead of exploiting her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot be avoided considering the situation, but can be controlled for the worst that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18315018315 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98390715584 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6642890748 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128821606487 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362464315261 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054346830665 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821471459951 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691014429599 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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