Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for our answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The existence of zoos has long been a topic of debate, with some arguing that they are cruel and should be shut down, while others believe they play a vital role in protecting wild animals. This essay will explore both perspectives, discussing the potential drawbacks of zoos as well as their potential benefits in conservation efforts. Ultimately, it will be argued that while improvements are necessary, well-managed zoos can contribute to the protection and education of wildlife.
On one hand, critics argue that zoos are inherently cruel, as they confine animals to limited spaces, depriving them of their natural habitats and freedom. Animals may suffer from stress, boredom, and reduced lifespans due to the limitations of captivity. Additionally, concerns are raised about the ethical implications of breeding programs and the potential exploitation of animals for entertainment purposes. These arguments emphasize the need for alternative approaches to wildlife conservation that prioritize animal welfare.
On the other hand, proponents of zoos contend that they serve a crucial role in protecting endangered species and promoting conservation efforts. Zoos often participate in breeding programs, which help maintain genetic diversity and prevent the extinction of endangered animals. They also provide a controlled environment where animals can be protected from poaching, habitat loss, and other threats in the wild. Furthermore, zoos offer educational opportunities for the public, raising awareness about conservation issues and inspiring people to take action.
From my point of view, while acknowledging the concerns raised by critics, it is important to recognize that not all zoos are the same. Some zoos prioritize animal welfare, providing spacious enclosures, enrichment activities, and veterinary care. These well-managed zoos focus on conservation, research, and education, aiming to inspire visitors to appreciate and protect wildlife. However, it is crucial to hold all zoos to high standards and ensure that they prioritize the well-being of the animals in their care.
In conclusion, the debate surrounding zoos is multifaceted. While some argue that zoos are cruel and should be closed down, others believe they play a valuable role in protecting wild animals. It is essential to address the concerns raised by critics and work towards improving the conditions and practices within zoos. By prioritizing animal welfare, conservation efforts, and education, well-managed zoos can contribute to the protection of endangered species and foster a greater understanding and appreciation for wildlife.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77892030848 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12352978216 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52442159383 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2036485844 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.315789474 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28989877578 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957516692352 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688720709401 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181915259578 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568311340741 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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