To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The most important characteristics of a society are represented by it’s people, the culture, the infrastructure and the heritage that the society beholds and the majority of the population and the infrastructure of any society flourishes in it’s major cities hence I agree with the prompt suggesting that one needs to study the major cities of nations to get a deeper look into the major characteristics of the society.
Any major city of a nation will encompass the majority of its population as well as infrastructure reflecting the society’s economic as well as social status to the people who are oblivious to it thereby providing deeper insights about the characteristics of the society. For example, Bangalore, which is the IT Hub of India is the home for some of the biggest startups of the country. Bangalore represents the technological advancements of India as a nation to the world, similarly Delhi which is the political hub of the nation reflects India’s position in the political world.
Apart from modern advancements, cities also nurture the traditional heritage that has been passed on from centuries. Hyderabad, popularly known for the famous “CharMinar” has a large number of historical monuments and palaces that have been preserved. These cultural artifacts represent the traditions and rituals that used to be followed decades and centuries ago hence reflecting the historical aspects of Indian culture.
While it is true that cities are not the only representation of a society since many a times the true essence of a society is impaired due to the fast paced urbanisation in the cities and hence villages, towns and countrysides might seem to be a better choice for giving deeper looks into a nation’s characteristics but I believe that the most important depiction of any society are its people. People from small villages and towns often tend to migrate to big cities for better education and career growth and hence making cities a blend of both worlds: the modern urbanisation, technological advancements as well the population from the traditional regions of the nation.
Therefore, to say that major cities highlight the most important characteristics of the society is apt since cities are the symbol of a country’s socio-economic and political status in the world’s eyes and they help people get a deeper insight into its culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'by its people'?
Suggestion: by its people
...cteristics of a society are represented by it’s people, the culture, the infrastructure and th...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: IT_IS[16]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...ristics of a society are represented by it’s people, the culture, the infrastructure...
^^^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: IT_IS[18]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...astructure of any society flourishes in it’s major cities hence I agree with the pro...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ciety. For example, Bangalore, which is the IT Hub of India is the home for some of th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ly known for the famous “CharMinar” has a large number of historical monuments and palaces that h...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cades and centuries ago hence reflecting the historical aspects of Indian culture...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
... representation of a society since many a times the true essence of a society is impair...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23958333333 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16875188335 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.615916571 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.2 118.986275619 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.21951772744 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211996286606 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822957421408 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657316858381 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126210052871 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651905076829 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 14.1392134831 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.8420337079 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'by its people'?
Suggestion: by its people
...cteristics of a society are represented by it’s people, the culture, the infrastructure and th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: IT_IS[16]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...ristics of a society are represented by it’s people, the culture, the infrastructure...
^^^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: IT_IS[18]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...astructure of any society flourishes in it’s major cities hence I agree with the pro...
^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ciety. For example, Bangalore, which is the IT Hub of India is the home for some of th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ly known for the famous “CharMinar” has a large number of historical monuments and palaces that h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cades and centuries ago hence reflecting the historical aspects of Indian culture...
^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
... representation of a society since many a times the true essence of a society is impair...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23958333333 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16875188335 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.615916571 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.2 118.986275619 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.21951772744 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211996286606 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822957421408 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657316858381 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126210052871 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651905076829 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 14.1392134831 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.8420337079 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.