Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
children have always been part of argument and debate. many individuals believe that parents should be choosing leisure activity for their offspring whereas; others think that children should have free to choose their free time activities. In this essay will spread light on both statement and include viewpoint.
On the one hand, guardians have responsibility to select free time tasks for their offspring because parents know their child very well and they do the thing for their batter future. parents have main role in shaping their child and being good adult. Nowadays, youngsters use their free time in smart phones and computers which harm their eyes. If parents make rules for their child they become more productive and grow with knowledge. For instance, many children west their productive time in games and computers which not useful in their future.
On the other hand, many parents make multiple tasks for their children in their leisure. so, they have no time for outdoor activities and art they love. For example, many children have to attend multiple classes in their free time such as spoken English, swimming and so on. For this reason they do not have time to relax and chill with their friend.
In my opinion, parents always think good for children but sometime over burden make children tired and anxious.
In conclusion, children also have right to choose their activities and parents should have support their child. parents should always watch to their children and encourage them for different tasks.
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- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24861201633 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4893169968 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416065078028 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164983149982 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970988249677 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265524498645 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792008254493 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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