Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays, this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Some people believe that having a university education secures people’s success in life while others disapprove of this opinion. In my opinion, a university degree can prepare graduated students with good profiles to apply for certain jobs, but it cannot define a person’s success in life since there are many ways to achieve success.
University education offers students the fundamental foundation of knowledge that can be applied in practical settings, especially when it comes to working. Students attending universities receive specialized training in their majors so that they can utilize the acquired knowledge to seek well-paid positions. Moreover, a university certificate is a reliable evidence of a person’s competence for specific jobs and it increases the chances of getting a spot in esteemed companies. Therefore, some people might assume that the optimal way to achieve success in life is to pursue higher education.
Although studying at universities can boost prospects of success in certain circumstances, I presume that it is not the only way that individuals must follow to succeed in life. Since there is a plethora of vocations that are not academically requiring, many high school graduates choose to work straight instead of spending thousands of dollars on tertiary education. For example, hairstylist is a lucrative job for people who skip universities and have no academic certificate. Furthermore, bypassing universities to join the workforce provides individuals with valuable working experiences in different fields despite no prior preparation, unlike university attendees. By engaging in various fields, early entrants into the workforce are likely to learn from mistakes and gain experience to better their performances and earn more money, which contribute crucially to people’s success in life.
In conclusion, although some people’s perspectives of success depend on university education because it teaches students basic knowledge to apply for well-paid jobs and validates people’s competency, I believe that this is not the only path leading to anyone’s success in life. They can still be successful in life without a university education since there is a variety of undemanding jobs and an opportunity to learn and improve while earning monthly.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64265129683 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10701852301 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2282835528 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.615384615 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276225242855 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107581611434 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805312220627 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192043247565 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596014551901 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64265129683 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10701852301 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2282835528 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.615384615 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276225242855 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107581611434 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805312220627 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192043247565 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596014551901 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.