In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and families.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
On account of the competitive job market, many people these days are pulled away from their hometown to seek prospects of employment. This social trend has both merits and demerits, and I totally believe that the downsides overshadow the benefits.
On the one hand, migrating far from home allows people to expand their relationship, which means it is a valuable chance to make friends with not only from their colleagues but also from their new neighbours. This is because, in order to get accustomed to the new accommodation, people have to be exposed to the surrounding society first, which helps them to become better acquainted with other people. As a result, their circle of friends will be widen.
On the other hand, the migration of labour also has some drawbacks. The first thing most people have to confront with is the financial burden. This is because, immigrant workers usually have to spend most of their salary on accommodation such as the rent money and utility bills, and other expenses. For example, many young employees who migrate from rural areas to urban areas suffer from the inflation in prices of housing, food or healthcare. Besides, while struggling with adjusting to the new environment, many people are under pressure from work, friends, fellows, especially homesickness. The reason for this is that they often feel loneliness and depressed as there is no one they can rely on. The long-term negative thoughts, in turn, pose a threat to there mental health, which can leads to problems such as anxiety and depression.
In a nutshell, while the movement of workers from one place to another has some undeniable benefits, I strongly contend that the demerits outweigh the merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 793, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...hreat to there mental health, which can leads to problems such as anxiety and depress...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07067137809 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67818882389 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1057928029 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258178287427 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802102520832 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497310532271 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140028490299 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492020429766 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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