All over the world, societies are facing a growing proble with Obesity. this problem affects both children and adults. what are the reasons for this rise in obesity. how could it be tackled
Recently, our societies are suffering an enormous increase in obesity in international scale. In my country VietNam, for example, whose people are known for their skiny body types, now are diagnosed with obesity or facing obesity-related illnesses in adults as well as children. This essay will look into the causes of the rising issue and propose some solutions about how to tackle the problem.
One of the main reasons of the problem is that people’s eating habits are becoming worse all the time. Most of them prefer to eat junk food instead of healthy one, such as fries, soft drinks, etc. These kind of food affects human’s health badly, it contains a huge amount of calories. As a result, when consumers consume more calories than the needed amount, it might lead to obesity. Dealing with this issue involves changing unhealthy eating habit by increasing tax on junk food. This would make people spend less on unhealthy food.
Another problem is that modern people are too lazy to exercise. Unless they do sports after eating, they will be still on the edge of facing obesity. Present-day gives adults and children many convenient means of entertainment that make them less active. For example, in spare time, children or even adults just want to sit on a couch and watch televions. They do not usually think of doing sports like jodging or playing badminton, etc. Consequently, their bodies do not burn calories and contribute to obesity. The way forward might be to promote the benefits of being fit accompany with “green diet” in some programmes on televisions.
A third cause of the rise in obesity is that people’s awareness about the impact of obesity and several side-effects of it. In many countries all over the world, there are more and more individuals who are struggling with obesity-related illnesses or, even worse, death. Those severe health problems could include finding it hard to breathe, heart disease, strokes, cancer, digestive problems, etc. This problem could be addressed by making everyone aware of the serious effects that obesity could cause and how to live a healthy life and prolong their life spans.
To sum up, obesity is still a big concern in our societies. It could happen to anyone, from children to adults, and lead to potentially dangerous health outcomes. The main solution is to raise people’s awareness. The longer we prolong to complete this mission, the faster obesity’s rate gets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...y one, such as fries, soft drinks, etc. These kind of food affects human’s health badly, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, so, still, third, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61934928993 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587654320988 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5505749651 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36765099772 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782934599407 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627454177384 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187096961505 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904162199507 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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