There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?
In recent times, the level of noise in metropolitan regions is increasing at an alarming rate. While noise pollution in public sites is attributable to a wide range of causes, there are solutions available that we should adopt to mitigate the excessive degree of urban noise.
On the one hand, there is a myriad of factors that contribute to urban noise pollution, and the most significant one is the high population density. As a matter of fact, most cities are densely populated with millions of inhabitants and their daily activities create various noises with different volumes. To be more specific, travelling is the major sources of noise because city residents nowadays tend to rely more on motorized vehicles such as automobiles or motorbikes for their day-to-day life. Furthermore, these vehicles, when in operation, release massive amount of noise from exhaust pipes, horns or even operating engines. It is also worth mentioning that in rush hours, when roads are packed with cars and other modes of transport, excessive noise emitted from those vehicles is considered unsafe for the local citizens. To exemplify, some surveys have revealed that the traffic noise in peak hours in Hanoi city usually reaches approximately 150 decibels, which might have some detrimental effects on people’s hearing, especially the elder.
On the other hand, though there are various measures can be taken to lessen the level of noise pollution in metropolitan areas, I contend that because traffic is mainly blame for the dramatic rise of urban noise, the most effective solution is that the local authority should encourage city dwellers to break their habits of commuting by public vehicles and other alternatives. In particular, a bus of average size is capable of carrying up to 60 passengers, which is dozens of times as large as the capacity of private cars. Therefore, if a vast majority of population start to use city buses on a daily basis, the number of vehicles would considerably decrease, which leads to the drop of the level of traffic noise. Take the example of Da Nang, a great metropolis, this city used to be a noise pollution hotspot in Vietnam; nevertheless, in the last four years, the local authority was successful in its effort to persuade Da Nang citizens to leave their cars home and use city buses by simply making bus services free of charge. Consequently, only six months after the implementation of this policy, Danang witnessed a dramatic decline of the degree of traffic noise.
To sum up, cities in this era are too noisy for various reasons, yet the traffic is the main one. In order to keep the noise pollution to the minimum, the state should make city dwellers use public means of transport more frequently.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... are solutions available that we should adopt to mitigate the excessive degree of urban ...
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Line 3, column 1173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decline of the degree of traffic noise. To sum up, cities in this era are too no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02192982456 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74740357016 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550438596491 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9178523017 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150725551656 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498733559976 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291631275251 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977731884538 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257389037779 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... are solutions available that we should adopt to mitigate the excessive degree of urban ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decline of the degree of traffic noise. To sum up, cities in this era are too no...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02192982456 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74740357016 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550438596491 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9178523017 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150725551656 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498733559976 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291631275251 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977731884538 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257389037779 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.