The maps below show the city of Eastminster in 1999 and 2009.
The maps illustrate significant changes in the layout of Eastminster city from 1999 to 2009.
Overall, between 1999 and 2009, the city became more industrialized with the transformation of woodland to a park and an upgrade of infrastructure such as housing and factories.
In the Northeast part of the city, the park was reduced by half in 2009 compared to that of ten years before. However, the number of houses near the park doubled in a 10-year period. Another significant change was the conversion of woodland to an adventure park, which meant the area was transformed from green space to an amusement park for entertainment purposes. Moreover, near the Northern side of the river used to have a large house with gardens, but in 2009, it was completely upgraded to a hotel with golf courses.
In the Southern area of the city, there used to be nothing along the railway station until factories and warehouses were constructed in 2009. Moreover, the streets of houses and a public garden to the Eastern side in 1999 were redeveloped to apartment blocks and houses after ten years. Also, the school was relocated in 2009 to make way for a shopping complex and the hospital was extended to fulfill the needs of citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87081339713 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80220244546 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0019399815 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189985971966 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935202751707 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127756999307 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179529967788 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152523698372 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.