24. Many people believe that family has a greater influence on a child's life and development then other factors such as friends TV music and so on do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the contemporary global landscape, it is widely observed the fast-paced competitive lifestyle, not much attention is paid to adolescent grooming. Some people assert the viewpoint that these days children's lives are highly dominated by their companion circle or gadgets such as television or phones. I completely agree with this school of thought. This essay shall discuss the stance in detail with valid arguments and references.
To begin with, predominantly children spend more time with their entertainment tools such as phones, television or other recreational activities such as music, etc. According to a recent survey from London University, out of 24 hours, 60% of the children's time is spent on using gadgets. These results evidently show kids' engagement and level of influence on their mental development. Due to high engagement, many kids get influenced by the cartoon characters and consider them role models. Adolescents idealize these characters and try to behave in a similar fashion.
Similarly, children vividly spend more time with their friends in or after school. Indispensable, this is an influential source for their mental grooming. There is a famous saying that a man is known by the company he keeps. Children learn different aspects of life through such informal gatherings. They share different perspectives and viewpoints to debate which changes their ideologies.
To recapitulate, i reiterate that nowadays adolescents' life is more dominated by their friend's circle and the gadgets they use rather than their families. It is mainly because of adults' high engagement in their professional lives and because of a lack of interest in their child's grooming and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47348484848 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00687677932 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3820332548 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150629853725 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485370055747 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443428905273 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886571867856 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305574648199 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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