Write about the following topic.
It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is widely believed that the veteran who had a big contribution to the progress of the world thought less about their personal life, instead of focusing mostly on their work and spent much of their life in it. As a result, they ignored their work life balance. In my personal view, work life balance is very important to have healthy lifestyle, while extreme motivation may people tend to concentrate more on their work than enjoying the life.
The interest for work depends on two vital factors, one is the necessity for living, another is the motivation to achieve certain goals rather than merely earning for living. Most of the people work for the former reason. For them, work life balance is an important demand to lead a better life. Extreme work leads to fatigue, indifference and exhaustion. People who cannot maintain a good work life balance, multiple complexities about health and personal life sorrounds themsleves. For instance, when people spend time in office work more than their physical or mental capacity, they develop cardiovascular diseases. In addition to that, their marital life also become vulnerable. Moreover, children do not get their parents company to spend some quality time, resulting psychological distance between parents and kids. This leads to behavioral anomalies when they grow up. Therefore, a proper work life balance is most important.
On the other hand, some extraordinary people get a kind of motivation and desire to work for achieving personal and social goal that are beyond most pupil scope. For example, scientists who works day and night spending most of their time in lab and research work, this less about their personal life and enjoyment. They get enjoyment from their work. Similarly, some politicians also spend most of their time engaging with society and community. Therefore, can hardly think of their personal entertainment. These circumstances are exceptional where personal preference is not the work life balance but the enjoyment come from achieving their goal.
Summing up, work life balance is an utmost importance for most of the people and should be maintained well. It is an important skill to manage the work life balance in daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16388888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772662297 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4614092694 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5238095238 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395045111671 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151589261426 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881868800394 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294418517435 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520636127898 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.