Apps like tiktok or instagram worsen the mental well-being of teenagers. Do you agree or disagree?
With the widespread use of social media, there is one school of thought that apps such as TikTok and Instagram finally have a negative effect on adolescents’ mental health. From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement due to a lack of time for family and a bad impact on their development.
First, social networking can dominate children’s time for family. These days, one group of teenagers tend to overuse social media for such a long period, even 4-5 hours per day. This means that there is a deficiency of other activities, which renders them less active and creates a big gap in family members. The implications are that they run a high risk of isolation and loneliness, attributed to a lack of interaction. If not properly controlled, this can negatively affect children themselves.
In addition, social media can take a toll on the growth of teenagers in terms of their behaviors and lifestyle. There are many videos uploaded on the internet with content unsuitable for children. Especially at an impressive age, this induces children to imitate bad behaviors and get involved in social evils like bullying. If not raise awareness of these things, this can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, the overuse of social media like TikTok and Instagram are two of the culprits of a shortage of time for family and a harmful life. Therefore, it is our joined duties to bring the most out of social networking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81291126846 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4924086003 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100047734252 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320304035527 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470316501493 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685290118609 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439710711468 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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