The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The given pie charts give information about the online shopping sales for four retail sectors namely travel, film/music, books, and clothes in New Zealand over a period of a decade starting from 2003 to 2013.

Overall, as can be seen from the charts, it is clear that an upward trend was seen in the proportion of online shopping sales in New Zealand for film/music and books while the opposite was true for the figures for travel and clothes. In addition, the rate of online sales for film/music experienced the most noticeable change over the given period.

In 2003, the rate of online shopping sales for travel in New Zealand was the highest, at 36%, while the figure for film/music was significantly lower, at about a fifth. Meanwhile, clothes and books accounted for 24% and 19% of the online shopping sales of the population in New Zealand respectively.

In 2013, the percentage of film/music in online shopping sales in New Zealand rose dramatically by 12% to approximately a third and became the highest retail sector. At the same time, a slight increase of 3% to 22% was seen in the figure for books. By contrast, the proportion of online shopping sales for clothes in New Zealand declined remarkably by 8% to 16%, while there was a noticeable decrease in the figure for travel.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84234234234 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67878682837 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463963963964 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2464525667 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.375 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46036660692 0.215688989381 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244365608666 0.103423049105 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118386100084 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343615266929 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822430015557 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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