It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Managing your money is an essential skill that a person should learn. According to some it has enormous effect on your future lifestyle and cause change your life extremely extent. I Think it is an awesome skill if someone know how use and strongly agree with it.
On the one hand, parents should teach their children in their early years how manage their money and how split it for several tasks. In addition, they should notice to adolescences do not buy unnecessary things which leads waste your money. This Not only can help them when they go to university and live apart from the home and family but it also, is an advantage if everyone has this feature. For instance, in university you should pay the tuition, bills, and so on even know how allocate your money you can save some money for yourself. Even though parents have a crucial role to bring their children with this skill, education systems should teach them too.
On the other hand, young generation spend much money daily for useless things and waste them without any think. In such case, families should not provide their needs for better understanding. They do not pay attention for their life prospect in the future and do not worry about it. If you have this vision your life never improve and the quality of your life don’t change. Pluses, it becomes a big problem in your marriage life when cannot save your money at least one third of it. Hence, it is necessary especially for young generation to know how they can spend their money in the right ways.
In conclusion, save money never this means you don’t allow spend your money for different thing, it means don’t waste your money for useless things and in my opinion it is a wonderful skill if you learn it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ause change your life extremely extent. I Think it is an awesome skill if someone...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...Think it is an awesome skill if someone know how use and strongly agree with it. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, third, apart from, at least, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64077669903 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20852388214 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1089756842 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318651995556 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112283127625 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062463064637 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199729146749 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659445029264 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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