Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, sugar is including harmful foods. although sugar is one of the most harmful substances which can cause various diseases all manufactures use high levels of sugar to product food and drink. In my opinion, one way for preventing sugary foods and drinks consumption is increasing these goods and I strongly agree with this issue.
As a good reason, governments should set tax for manufactures and companies that use a lot of sugar daily or weekly to product sugary foods and drinks that make sellers get expensive their goods. By increasing the price of sugar in short term people less consume sugar and it good for them. Hence, can prevent people to consume these foods. High taxes make companies choose a good and useful alternative food substance instead of sugar that is good for health. if the average rate of sugary foods increase in a person makes a lots dangerous sugar disease.
Another point is companies and productor which product sugary drinks and food can raise price of drinks and food which used more sugar. all companies should notice to people health and must care about it. they can set a rule if the sugar exceeded the limit people should pay extra money for drink or food. This makes people reduce them consume high levels of sugar.
In conclusion, although sugary drinks are harmful for health people like them and if use these goods make addicted to them. It made several various sugar diseases that in the future will harm themselves. One way that can prevent of consumption of people is expensive the price sugary goods. With this method most of people don’t use it except their passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ably, sugar is including harmful foods. although sugar is one of the most harmful substa...
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Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...stead of sugar that is good for health. if the average rate of sugary foods increa...
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Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stead of sugar that is good for health. if the average rate of sugary foods increa...
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Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...sugary foods increase in a person makes a lots dangerous sugar disease. Another point...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... drinks and food which used more sugar. all companies should notice to people healt...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...he price sugary goods. With this method most of people don’t use it except their passion.
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Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople don’t use it except their passion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86330935252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34933672655 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471223021583 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8259886883 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364955209942 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137423420674 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770217151239 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256123287104 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734456976157 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.