The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists in millions from the United Kingdom who took a plan to another country and those who visited to the UK between 1979 to 1999, and the bar chart shows the most popular countries that UK residents visited in 1999.
Overall, the visits from and to the United Kingdom rose gradually, and the highest country that UK citizens visited was France.
First, the figure for visits abroad by UK residents was outnumbered the number of visitors to UK over 20 years period, at the start of the timeframe they were similar with approximately 10 million, but at the end of the period the total amount of visits abroad rose dramatically from 10 million to slightly over 50 million, On the other hand, the proportion of visitors to the UK increased marginally from 10 million to just under 30 million.
Secondly, it is clear that France was the highest country to visit in 1999, with around 10 million of UK visitors, followed by Spain at approximately 9 million. And the lowest countries were Turkey, Greece and USA, at around 2, 3, 4 million visitors respectively
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...y that UK citizens visited was France. First, the figure for visits abroad by U...
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...m 10 million to just under 30 million. Secondly, it is clear that France was th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82722513089 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65211024837 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534031413613 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.597592272 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.4 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42063103973 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246203209082 0.103423049105 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201160536654 0.0843802449381 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29261121786 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195308777368 0.0819641961636 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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